WG and TF updates #1018
WG and TF updates #1018
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- abbreviations (expanding some) - simplify summary sentence (without removing or changing meaning) and format as a list for readability - add section with quick link to Admin home page - remove generic headings - add headings / structure content meaningfully under headings that match key words in the information - make headings sentence case - remove capital letters from nouns that are not proper nouns - Make link text slightly more descriptive, including signaling if moving away from WAI to a different sub-site. - Add / correct URLs - remove passive tense - use plain language - make sentences more concise - make list items consist of only one sentence per item (best practice) - fix typos
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Hi @tamsinewing555,
Thanks for this. I like your alternative approach that avoids lots of headings with a single link. Thanks for taking the time to come up with a solution to my concerns!
There are a few wee things that are slightly off. I have put comments into the PR - ping me if you are unable to find them.
pages/about/groups/agwg.md
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| * [Record of decisions made by the WG](https://www.w3.org/WAI/GL/wiki/Decisions); | ||
| * [meeting minutes](https://www.w3.org/WAI/GL/minutes-history). | ||
| * [List of publications by the AG Working Group](https://www.w3.org/groups/wg/ag/publications/) | ||
| * [Intellectual property rights — AG Working Group](https://www.w3.org/groups/wg/ag/ipr/) |
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This text need to remain as is or close to this:
W3C maintains a public list of any patent disclosures made in connection with the deliverables of the group; that page also includes instructions for disclosing a patent.
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I've added in the text and adjusted the link to go to the relevant section on the page.
This is so that the link text better reflects the keywords the user is expecting.
Will this work for you?
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No, I think this needs to be previous wording or close to:
W3C maintains a public list of any patent disclosures made in connection with the deliverables of the group. There are also instructions for disclosing a patent.
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| **Accessibility Conformance Testing (ACT) Rules Format 1.0** | ||
| Once you are a member of the AG Working Group, [email the ACT Task Force chairs](https://www.w3.org/groups/tf/wcag-act/participants/#chairs) to let them know you’d like to join the task force. |
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Email should be to Team Contact: https://www.w3.org/groups/tf/wcag-act/participants/#staff
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| - W3C Standard: [https://www.w3.org/TR/act-rules-format/](https://www.w3.org/TR/act-rules-format/) | ||
| - Errata: [https://www.w3.org/WAI/GL/task-forces/conformance-testing/errata](https://www.w3.org/WAI/GL/task-forces/conformance-testing/errata) | ||
| **Note:** As a participant in one of the AG Working Group’s task forces, you can choose to focus your time exclusively on the task force deliverables and you do not have to contribute to the working group’s other deliverables as well. |
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Minor: Too many 'deliverables'. Perhaps:
Note: As a participant in one of the AG Working Group’s task forces, you can choose to focus your time exclusively on the task force deliverables and you do not have to contribute to the working group’s other activities.
Is a little bit more accurate too.
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| To join the ACT TF, individuals must be participants of the AG WG. Participants are expected to [actively contribute](/about/groups/task-forces/conformance-testing/work-statement/#participation) to the work of the Task Force. If you are interested in participating in the ACT TF, please send e-mail to: [Daniel Montalvo](mailto:[email protected]?subject=ACT%20TF%20Enquiry) and include a little bit about what you're interested in and how you think that you may be able to contribute to the Task Force. Then follow the [AG Working Group participation](/about/groups/agwg/participate/) procedures to join the Working Group, and once you have joined ask [Daniel Montalvo](mailto:[email protected]) to add you to the task force. | ||
| The ACT Task Force has published the following resources under the name of the AG Working Group: |
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This strictly is not correct. AGWG are the publishing group. Might be better to remove the 'and copyright' from the heading - IPR is managed through membership to the WG not the TF. Text might also be better as:
The ACT Task Force develops and maintains the following resources:
| If you have a question for the task force, email the [chairs](https://www.w3.org/groups/tf/wcag-act/participants/#chairs) or the [W3C staff contact](https://www.w3.org/groups/tf/wcag-act/participants/#staff). |
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Hmm... irritating. No chairs/TC group email.
Ah well... only thing to change is the heading then:
Contact the chairs
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